Chuck's Character - Marcella Marks

[Angela Valdez]

Johanna Zaren

Brawn - 2
Finesse - 3
Resolve - 2
Wits - 3
Panache - 2

Nation - Avalon
Religion - Vaticine
Sword School - Kjemper
Hubris - Misfortunate
Advantages
Commission (Sailor)
University
Linguist
Toughness

Languages
Avalon - literate
Castille
Eisen
Montaigne
Ussuran
Vendel

Artist
Musician (Guitar) - 2
Drawing - 1
Courtier
Dancing - 1*
Etiquette - 2
Fashion - 1
Oratory - 1*
Doctor
Diagnosis - 3
First Aid - 3
Quack - 1
Merchant
Cooking - 2
Performer
Acting - 1
Dancing - 1*
Oratory - 1*
Singing - 3
Sailor
Balance - 1
Climbing - 1*
Knotwork - 1
Rigging - 1
Swimming - 1
Archer
Attack - 3
Fletcher - 1
Athlete
Climbing - 3*
Footwork - 3
Sprinting - 1
Throwing - 1
Side-Step - 1
Heavy Weapon
Attack - 3
Parry - 1
Corps-a-Corps - 1
Exploit Weakness (Kjemper) - 1
Shield
Parry - 3
Attack - 1
Wall of Steel - 1

Background
True Identity (Marcella Marks) - 1
Treasure Map - 1

[Black Jack Rackham]

Heya Chuck, ok lemme answer questions first.
1) Yup they add together (to a maximum of 3, though you don't have any that overlap that much)
2) Saw your notes, looks good so far!

Points breakdown:
Traits 48
Swordschool 25*
Arcana -10
Advantages 12*
Languages 6
Skills 42

For a grand Total of 123. So you have another 7 HP to use.

So my asterisks are questions I had. I am not sure whether you intended to make a Vendel or a Vestenmannjavnjar. (Which will affect the points so take my total with a grain of salt until then) I ask because you have a Vesten swordschool (which the Vendel would probably consider to be a bit barbaric), but you also have a commission and the Linguist advantage (which is only a discount for the Vendel). Now I should state I have no problems with you being a Vendel who knows a Vesten swordschool, but I will say that I would think you might find some other Vesten who have a problem with it.

[salamanca]

Mark means "go with that". It gives us a chance to meddle with you in game.

[Angela Valdez]

Heya Chuck, ok lemme answer questions first.
1) Yup they add together (to a maximum of 3, though you don't have any that overlap that much)
2) Saw your notes, looks good so far!

Points breakdown:
Traits 48
Swordschool 25*
Arcana -10
Advantages 12*
Languages 6
Skills 42

For a grand Total of 123. So you have another 7 HP to use.

So my asterisks are questions I had. I am not sure whether you intended to make a Vendel or a Vestenmannjavnjar. (Which will affect the points so take my total with a grain of salt until then) I ask because you have a Vesten swordschool (which the Vendel would probably consider to be a bit barbaric), but you also have a commission and the Linguist advantage (which is only a discount for the Vendel). Now I should state I have no problems with you being a Vendel who knows a Vesten swordschool, but I will say that I would think you might find some other Vesten who have a problem with it.

No Marcella is from Avalon. When I post her full history, I will clarify things.

[Black Jack Rackham]

Avalon it is!

NEW Points breakdown:
Traits 48
Swordschool 35
Arcana -10
Advantages 13
Languages 6
Skills 42

For a new total of 134 HP. You have a bunch of Advanced Skills, you could do away with 2 (they're actually cheaper to buy with XP) and that would leave you with the 2 HP you wanted for backgrounds.